1. Practical
Week 8 is self study break. There is no class conducted by Mr. Martin.
2. Lecture
This week is self study break. There is no lecture conducted by Mr. Fauzi.
3. Tutorial
Mr. Fauzi gave me feedback on my 80% self titled progress.
His feedback is attached below:
I would like to suggest for you to only use the sun and your self photo only from this composition because the quality and concept is match.
Somehow the other layer is not sharp and the cropping is not clean. You may replace it into some supporting elements from Internet.
These two images are provided by Mr. Fauzi.
Figure 1.0
Figure 1.1
Therefore, I redo my composition with different elements added.
Figure 1.2 Me and a bunch of sunflower
Figure 1.3 Sun
Figure 1.4 Goldfish
Figure 1.5 Dog
Figure 1.6 Planet
Figure 1.7 Cloud
Figure 1.8 Yellow triangle
Figure 1.9 Yellow circle
Final outcome of Project 2 self titled
My composition main colour is yellow. As yellow stands for sunshine and healthy lifestyle. I match the colour of the planet to match my composition. The colour of the sky is also changed to light yellow. I added a few shapes so the upper part of the composition won't look empty.



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